Aggie The Hag Comments

light and smiley great on haloween felt like a ride on the broom myself...great poetry cheers

I love your Aggie witch, poem. Maybe Chrissam and Aggie can get together, They could fly through the sky at night What a wonderful sight that would be I know Aggie is a bit scared of heights But if she held on to Chrissam, she might not be They could make spells, together Make the rain fall from the sky In many different colours Wouldn’t that be lovely, oh my They could maybe have tea Then make some more spell And Aggie can show Chrissam, how she makes Those terrible smells.

Beautifully done! This is what I'm talkin' about.Charming, Inventive, light-hearted and humorous.

I found this to be quite creative and a delightful read. There were a couple of rhyming problems, but those are minor. The poem was clear in meaning and the ending was a good one. I give it a good recommendation. GW62

Sheer magic Dee Sugarcraft is better than witchcraft

Very delightful and full of laughs. She makes for a better witch than a good witch. The ending is a pleasant and not-to-be suspected surprise. This witch certainly acts like a human would.

A great potion of laughter if ever I read one, well done, Lisa

Dee, what a great afternoon I am having reading your amusing antidotes for life. With each one a smile you bring. Just lovely. Thanks for sharing. David

Yes, it is a bit mental. In fact it's very mental in the end, but it was welcome light relief. Thanks Dee. xx jim

Dee, That is just silly. I enjoyed it, but that is JUST SILLY! I am going to stop smiling really soon!

Dee, I really liked this one. Great fun.. definitely a trickey treat.

Hi Dee What fun this is.....a beautifully written Dee-light......a tasty treat to read! and thankyou for all your kind comments, too... Be well Love, D.

My daughter was just refusing to go to sleep - I've just read her this and she's a happy bunny now (which means so am I!) . Thanks Dee, this is really lovely. Hugs Anna xxx

Aggie the Hag indeed - a wonderful read and as commented below a picture is conjured up and it would be delightful with cartoon pictures to it - well done Dee Don S

I know Aggie the Hag.She is our company secretary.Pointy hat broomstick and she flies right off the handle.Great write Dee nice seasonal humour.Enjoyed it very much. Sid John.

What a splendid lighthearted read, worthy of my friend, Dr Zeus. Do you draw too? It would be such fun to see this one illustrated! I love your Aggie the Hag. Allie xxxxx

Ha! Cute, you had me in suspense 'til the very end! Love the rhymes and fun lines. -chuck

A fun heloween poem its good with a good end, (only i do not like cookies only cakes.)

DEE...AWESOME STORYLINE....inventive & very well constructed...HAPPY HALLOWEEN TO YOU TOO, MY DEAR & MAY TH' SPIRIT'S BE WITH YA'! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

What a delightful write Dee, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one, a lovely story with an unexpected ending. Very good one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX