Sunday, September 28, 2008

Ages And The Phoenix Comments

Rating: 4.7

For ages there have been decadence,
The denudation of the life's essence;
Life is but a fight of the presence.
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Koyel. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Indranil Bhaduri 29 September 2012

Very well written..Loved the piece, ,

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 November 2008

A thoughtful poem, which relates life and the myth of the Phoenix. Well written!

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 11 October 2008

Really a clever writing of a poem, well observed!

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Yasser Koor 06 October 2008

umm it is nice poem i like god work this poem is what world is and what poeple need life is fight of the presence and yes there is mind's insurgence, well-done good i gave u *10*

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Layla Joseph 05 October 2008

this poem is inxperational and depicts life in such a beautiful way 10

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 04 October 2008

Well, I don't believe in some fantastic creatures, but I do believe in this fantastic poetry. Good one. The symbolism strong..

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Chitra - 04 October 2008

layers of deep thought here your poem inspires the phoenix in me soar above the clutter rise atop in the skies of purpose so pure

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Nathaniel Booker 03 October 2008

I can truly relate to this wonderful poem Koyel, I've been through the fire and like the phoenix that you've penned so well, I too have risen **10** Be Well

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David Desantis 03 October 2008

I like this! the resurgence of fire, which was always there...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 October 2008

I love your Phoenix transverses into age's formation barriers to emerge afresh.Lovely piece from you koyel! !

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Aiswarya. T.anish 01 October 2008

Dreams have built the castles of ages in air, People let go of them in acute despair; Of spirits people are on arrears, Fortitude and bonanza allay their fears. great lines

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Joseph Poewhit 01 October 2008

I like that line with dreams, castles and most of all air

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 October 2008

'Since the dawn of civilization there have been mind's insurgence, which is nothing but the Phoenix's resurgence! ' A very nice poem. Love and 10+

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Ency Bearis 01 October 2008

a nice well written concept..a wonderful piece... Ency Bearis

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Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

a deep thought nice one very well thought and the words are very well put together 10+

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Paul Barnacle 01 October 2008

A difficult topic, well dealt with, but thought you became a little trapped by the intricacy's of your own prose.Your haiku, Harsh Rain, was a delight.Last verse of Memories, was superb. Best wishes, Paul B

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 30 September 2008

provocative.....thanks for sharing

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 29 September 2008

yes.yes very accurate assessment of the doom that seems to be staring at us all in the face...and how very true that it is indeed man who has arranged for himself this pyre upon which shall the insurgent mind burn....shall we rise again like the phoenix? ....that remains to be seen! .///10!

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Linda Moore 29 September 2008

Life is continual change, You can get stuck in fear and disappointments. You do not die from a failure, only if you stop trying. If Life has knocked you down, the only way is UP.......10 I like this very much

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