Ages And The Phoenix Comments

A nice poetic imagination, Koyel. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Very well written..Loved the piece, ,

A thoughtful poem, which relates life and the myth of the Phoenix. Well written!

Really a clever writing of a poem, well observed!

umm it is nice poem i like god work this poem is what world is and what poeple need life is fight of the presence and yes there is mind's insurgence, well-done good i gave u *10*

this poem is inxperational and depicts life in such a beautiful way 10

Well, I don't believe in some fantastic creatures, but I do believe in this fantastic poetry. Good one. The symbolism strong..

layers of deep thought here your poem inspires the phoenix in me soar above the clutter rise atop in the skies of purpose so pure

I can truly relate to this wonderful poem Koyel, I've been through the fire and like the phoenix that you've penned so well, I too have risen **10** Be Well

I like this! the resurgence of fire, which was always there...

I love your Phoenix transverses into age's formation barriers to emerge afresh.Lovely piece from you koyel! !

Dreams have built the castles of ages in air, People let go of them in acute despair; Of spirits people are on arrears, Fortitude and bonanza allay their fears. great lines

I like that line with dreams, castles and most of all air

'Since the dawn of civilization there have been mind's insurgence, which is nothing but the Phoenix's resurgence! ' A very nice poem. Love and 10+

a nice well written concept..a wonderful piece... Ency Bearis

a deep thought nice one very well thought and the words are very well put together 10+

A difficult topic, well dealt with, but thought you became a little trapped by the intricacy's of your own prose.Your haiku, Harsh Rain, was a delight.Last verse of Memories, was superb. Best wishes, Paul B

provocative.....thanks for sharing

yes.yes very accurate assessment of the doom that seems to be staring at us all in the face...and how very true that it is indeed man who has arranged for himself this pyre upon which shall the insurgent mind burn....shall we rise again like the phoenix? ....that remains to be seen! .///10!

Life is continual change, You can get stuck in fear and disappointments. You do not die from a failure, only if you stop trying. If Life has knocked you down, the only way is UP.......10 I like this very much