Ageless Invitation! Comments

As always, Fay, your poems tend to sparkle when you speak of male-female relationships or romantic encounters, and this charming write is certainly not an exception to that! In this one, the man's lack of charm and consideration for his love interest's desires deteriorated rapidly, exposed by his own crass tightfistedness and hunger for something other than food. No wonder she hung up on him! Great and entertaining write, Fay! Carl.

I loved this Fay, I can see you are young at heart or ageless as you say, good fun piece, good on yer girl! Lynda xx

F-un to read a-cquaint with sensuality y-es, its quite an ecstasy!

Hope you enjoyed your night out? Nice one this Fay.

Hey babe! your a bit on the wild side with this fun piece.10+ Tom

The most well 'laid' plans of mice, etc. Beautiful! .I'll bet many a' Dude' has had many a date end like this.Well done.Had to be said.

Wine and dine you any day of the week whippersnapper take away and good music just as good 10 for the golden pen Chris

hmmm... when the wining & dining becomes a chore & you just feel like an old... worn out woman... ; -) Very good one Fay... Now go paint the town red girl xx

Ah yes, I remember it well.Nice one Fay.Love it.Kev x

LoL Why not rave to the grave, no such thing as age... Andrew 10