Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Ageless Aurora. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Folds are unfolding, colour rainbowing
Within black velvet fields of midnight sky.
Aurora comes nigh.
Random smooth movement, streams of lowering
...
Read full text

Fay Slimm
COMMENTS
Herbert Nehrlich2 09 April 2009

Of course, what did I expect? No less than perfection in this intriguing poem. I must admit that I see a kinship here with another writer that I had not noticed before. The grace and care with which the deeper thoughts are presented to the reader is brilliant. Hxx

0 0 Reply
Lynda Robson 08 April 2009

Rich and vivid portrayal of the Northern Lights, thank you Fay, 10 Lynda xx

0 0 Reply
Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 April 2009

Aurora Borealis, ahh those northern lights delight like your poetry fay... Andy 10

0 0 Reply
Sue Sie 08 April 2009

Beautiful portrayal of the Aurora....well done

0 0 Reply
Fiona Davidson 08 April 2009

A fabulous natural phenomona described so beautifully by your gentle mind Fay.... wonderful read...thank you...Fi 10++

0 0 Reply
Ali Colby 08 April 2009

Very descripted, i felt as if i was watching the aurora. Great poem.

0 0 Reply
Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Close
Error Success