Folds are unfolding, colour rainbowing
Within black velvet fields of midnight sky.
Aurora comes nigh.
Random smooth movement, streams of lowering
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Rich and vivid portrayal of the Northern Lights, thank you Fay, 10 Lynda xx
Aurora Borealis, ahh those northern lights delight like your poetry fay... Andy 10
A fabulous natural phenomona described so beautifully by your gentle mind Fay.... wonderful read...thank you...Fi 10++
Very descripted, i felt as if i was watching the aurora. Great poem.
Of course, what did I expect? No less than perfection in this intriguing poem. I must admit that I see a kinship here with another writer that I had not noticed before. The grace and care with which the deeper thoughts are presented to the reader is brilliant. Hxx