Ageless Am I. Comments

Your heart and words are ageless and will live longer than we lesser so called poets thankyou for sharing ageless one 10 ++++ Chris

hi Fay, You sing sweet songs of eternity. Bountiful love my heart enshrines, For future and past it doen't pine. Here upon this bank and shoal of time, I have found self-redemption sublime CP

Avery creative storyline, indeed, Fay...Your stucture is virtually flawless, and linage flows like a new coin tossed 'cross an icepond....Age is but numbers, and time spent....It's what we do with that time, that will dictate our legacy, when we ultimately succumb to God's plan. You offer many erudite points, to muse upon, as many of the commentors below, have accurately touched on. Excellent work! F j R

love is the driving f0rce of the universe Fay We need no prating priests to tell us this

Beautiful words from my ageless mum - Thanks for being ageless you. Ever since I first got to know you in your teens (me being extremely small at that time) , you have been ageless, and therefore, above all, able to be my friend. You have also taught me well to be likewise. Thank you. Your ageless son xx

True poetry is ageless. You express yourself with eloquence and grace. Ten from me. Warm regards, Sandra

a very nice inspiring write which flows beautifuly and fed the mind....i loved it 10+++++

Fay, this is beautiful. I love the youthful pace of this fast moving poem - age transcends physicality, it's what lies in the soul. Some magnificent allusions to nature. A poem of clarity, wisdom and wonder - thoroughly enjoyable! S :)

You have expressed something that very few people, I think, experience in their lives. I once knew a pastor who told me that when people took him to task over the gospel message, they would quite often express their objections by saying, 'I just don't see it'. And therein lies the heart of the matter. Some people rarely see the beauty and perfection around them. You obviously see it so clearly and have shared the sensation eloquently - as always.

You obviously can pluck the best out of life and savor it. Ageless for sure, always seeing the positive side of life. A wonderful way to be, Fay. I enjoyed this very much. A '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

Fay, lovely poem written by a lady with a wonderful heart, like you I love my age, but mostly I live NOW. 10/10 Bob

Hi Fay. Sounds like you have a good recipe to me. Regards Dave T