Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Ageing (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 3.1

Grandma
wearing her sweater
the one with the hole
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Ben Gieske
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I'm fast approaching that great age.It's nice to read poetry that honors wisdom gained from living a long life.

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Magda Graf 02 May 2008

A wonderful series of Haiku that looks at the ageing process with tenderness and humour.

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Theresa Moore 27 April 2008

Being a grandma places me in the spotlight of your poem. At first I was a little resentful being reminded of the gaining years... but somehow you manage to put a smile on my face. Thanks for your well crafted poem...

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Thad Wilk 30 March 2008

Ordering the wine the same age, love it! Great poem and story, Ageing! *10*! ! Best regards Ben! Friend Thad

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