Wednesday, April 13, 2005

:) Ageing Couple Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is nice to watch them
Much as one might observe
Deer feeding undisturbed.
Just the every day significance of little things
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Bill Grace
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Sandra Fowler 19 September 2007

Old is gold in so many different ways. I liked this one very much. As always, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 03 March 2007

What a superbly simple picture you paint here - your Ageing couple share an unself-conscious grace - as you say - like deer feeding undisturbed. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Mary Nagy 14 April 2005

I so loved this poem! ! My heart warms at the thought of growing old with my husband. We've been together since we were next door neighbors at the age of 16 and we often watch 'older' couples and dream we too can make it! ! Thank you for such a wonderful poem. Sincerely, Mary

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kenneth william snow 13 April 2005

touching sentiment Mr. Grace...there is a nobleness in their walk earned from carrying generations of memories. kenneth

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