With age the questions come and go
and life begins its doubts to sow
for somehow now truth stands alone
and can no more be carved in stone;
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Your poem reminds me of Omar Khayyam. Its still a truth about life that we should fill teh cup while we are still in younger age, to avoid repentance at the end. Yes, life really is a passing one, a transient. Its full of symbolism and metaphor. Its really an honor to read the work of an expert. If you have time. Please read my poem, : Happiness, Intelligence, and Loyalty. thanks much
Your poem is full of love and hope. The world needs messages like this. We need more people like you. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
for truth is fragile, life a passing gift and all our certainties begin to shift ...well comprehended life by your heart and soul crafted to a poem...superb