Monday, March 5, 2018

Ageing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Welcome you as one of my girlfriends
Can't entertain any of your annoying boyfriends.
First a painful heart attack
Now sugar, to off-track
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 March 2018

A vivid portrayal of the intricacies of old age. A unique presentation well executed.10

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Loke Kok Yee 11 March 2018

Thanks for the humour sir, and the timely reminder that we are getting on in age and need to slow down.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2018

Brilliant, absolutely pragmatic! This fabulous piece of work come out of your heart out of your personal experiences and knowledge: Tests, medications and bills are your friends! I liked this beautiful poem so much...10

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Valsa George 05 March 2018

Interesting write Akhtarji.....! Admit him into your company but never allow his friends like Forgetfulness, Fatigue and Irritability to come anywhere near you! Enjoyed reading!

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