Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Aged Apple Comments

Rating: 5.0

Refusal of discipline
Stomach forces a tantrum
Insides seem to cringe
Site unseeable to some
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Rachael LoudFingers
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Marieta Maglas 02 October 2009

Nice abstract poem, very well written......10

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