Age To Youth Comments

I find this somewhat fat and phonetically boring.

good one.bold essence appeared. thanks.

This piece touches that forlorn melancholy attendant to the reality that the pages of life turn in one direction. The contrast of a scroll nearly completed to one in which the newness of life still writes with the bright sun of springtime completes the air of melancholy. Richly rendered. Bravo.

Isn't this the essence of poetry? To weave magic around us by the power of the word.... A lovely poem resting squarely on truth

A beautifully envisioned beautiful life song unfolding a part of it's philosophy. Congrats on it's selection as modern poem of the Day.

Cricket is the game of gentlemen, and so is the life. Life is a real event, Thanks for sharing a wonderful poem presenting a philosophy of life. Thanks. not a dream as many think. Play it like a gentleman,

a poem of comparing youths bloom to one of their own?

Bright desire.... congrats on being selected....

Like a scroll! ! Thanks for sharing.