Saturday, July 25, 2020

Age's Lamentations Comments

Rating: 5.0

Vanquished Age cannot mend Youth's broken wings.
It can only speak of Time's slow decay,
And myriad, needlessly suffering things.
It knows too well mind numbing nights and days:
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Shaun Cronick 25 July 2020

Neatly written Dominic with a well expressed lament message with a superb rhyme scheme structure to make said message flow and beat. 10+ and well deserved for to write in this rhyme scheme is so darned tricky and could easily collapse a poem with a duff word or forcing a rhyme. Thanks again and I wish you well.

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2020

Age and life Good friend But mind does not agree to go with age

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