Age's Lamentations Poem by DM W

Age's Lamentations

Rating: 5.0


Vanquished Age cannot mend Youth's broken wings.
It can only speak of Time's slow decay,
And myriad, needlessly suffering things.
It knows too well mind numbing nights and days:
Where Beauty hides from the world's prying eyes.
It bears the weight of biblical bleakness.
It sees through Life's novelties: smeared in lies.
It knows that light is buried by darkness.

Saturday, July 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: age,lamentations
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 25 July 2020

Neatly written Dominic with a well expressed lament message with a superb rhyme scheme structure to make said message flow and beat. 10+ and well deserved for to write in this rhyme scheme is so darned tricky and could easily collapse a poem with a duff word or forcing a rhyme. Thanks again and I wish you well.

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2020

Age and life Good friend But mind does not agree to go with age

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