Sunday, October 30, 2011

Age Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyday is a new beginning
and an old death
something worth living
but not in regret
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Bellaina Bella Hernandez
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Abdallah Gamal 03 November 2011

Another great piece of work, I loved the metaphors used and the chosen perfectly words drew a beautiful picture for true love, than for inviting me to read and watch that amazing scene that I've imagined since I was sent to this life, perfect and magnificent :)

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Kurtis Cwiklo 02 November 2011

your poem is breath taking, it describes what i feel almost every day. i don't have any pointers because the way you write is perfect keep up the good work

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