Friday, May 8, 2009

Age Counts Comments

Rating: 4.9

Girls still look at me
and though they smile...
Their eyes speak
A multitude of words.
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Afzal Shauq
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Tremendous write. I honestly dont feel my age, its whats in the heart that matters! Enjoyed; D

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Ana Monnar 25 June 2010

I loved your poem, you earned a perfect 10 from a 56 year old woman.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 June 2010

but still enjoy the warmth of summer, the coolness of winter, the joy of spring, and the blessings of harvest! be inspired always... you write good...

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Lady Grace 09 June 2010

hmmmm, nicely done...

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Hmm a hush poem…nice metaphor… ‘age revealed/by the creases of time’…thanks 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Maria Junnonen 02 May 2010

Yes. Age counts but I like old pople more than young. Nice poem.

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Leila Taghavi 11 April 2010

nice poem! thanks for sharing it

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Sandra Fowler 01 April 2010

Age does indeed count, but it has its moments as well. Beautifully written. Warm regards, Sandra

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Tsira Goge 07 February 2010

It is good if the girls smiles to you still, only look, At them special task, for that they smile to old man and welcome lovely, It was joke. Last line a poem I liked very much. 10x10 for this, Afzal. Thank you for the nice commet, Tsira

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Sara Beloved 03 January 2010

It's wonderful. Short, sweet, and full of emotion.

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Breanna Burge 29 December 2009

wow this poem is beautiful and yet again you can tell lots of emotion and effort was put in this... it mustve came straight from the heart cause thats where the best poems come from. Great job keep up the good work! !

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 28 November 2009

Lovely poem, it takes a lot of knowledge and experience to write such a meaningful poem, full of sensations and very sincere

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Brianna Cruz 22 August 2009

'through their eyes speaks a multitude of words.' amazing. and most women do think like this. maybe because they dont realize that age is just a number, and so is time. but some people actually think about whats on thee inside; personality wise haha. this poem is amazing and will always stay with me.

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Annabel Sheila 16 August 2009

An absolute gem...very strong emotions evoked with your poem. It was hauntingly beautiful! A lovely read...Wow! Anna

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Clementina Gallitelli 12 August 2009

I think this poem is beautiful and very heartfelt.

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dr veenaa rai 24 July 2009

older the wine, tastier it is, they say. ve a heart.good poetry

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Dana Amer 02 July 2009

Sure age counts, it's what we gain that attracts people to us when we age not what we look like anymore, its the wisdom & the experience is what makes us special when we grow older in not only in age but also in brain! nicely expressed in your poem.

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Lalitha iyer 30 June 2009

When we age, though we look young or younger in the case of some, thanks to modern techniques, mentally maturity is what makes us feel the absurdity of the physical attraction alone as a cause for lively interactions.............then what will the blind do...........poor blinded sons of God...........

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Shashendra Amalshan 27 June 2009

oh! ! ! this is sort of cute one sir! ! ! i ll tell you what if you smile from your heart, even at ninety girls will fall for you... very sweet write indeed! ! ! ! thanks sir! ! ! ... well expressed indeed! ! ! with lots of love and smile shan

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Shilesha Johnson 23 June 2009

wow this poem really touched my heart.. well written.. and well done

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