Girls still look at me
and though they smile...
Their eyes speak
A multitude of words.
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I loved your poem, you earned a perfect 10 from a 56 year old woman.
but still enjoy the warmth of summer, the coolness of winter, the joy of spring, and the blessings of harvest! be inspired always... you write good...
Hmm a hush poem…nice metaphor… ‘age revealed/by the creases of time’…thanks 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Yes. Age counts but I like old pople more than young. Nice poem.
Age does indeed count, but it has its moments as well. Beautifully written. Warm regards, Sandra
It is good if the girls smiles to you still, only look, At them special task, for that they smile to old man and welcome lovely, It was joke. Last line a poem I liked very much. 10x10 for this, Afzal. Thank you for the nice commet, Tsira
wow this poem is beautiful and yet again you can tell lots of emotion and effort was put in this... it mustve came straight from the heart cause thats where the best poems come from. Great job keep up the good work! !
Lovely poem, it takes a lot of knowledge and experience to write such a meaningful poem, full of sensations and very sincere
'through their eyes speaks a multitude of words.' amazing. and most women do think like this. maybe because they dont realize that age is just a number, and so is time. but some people actually think about whats on thee inside; personality wise haha. this poem is amazing and will always stay with me.
An absolute gem...very strong emotions evoked with your poem. It was hauntingly beautiful! A lovely read...Wow! Anna
older the wine, tastier it is, they say. ve a heart.good poetry
Sure age counts, it's what we gain that attracts people to us when we age not what we look like anymore, its the wisdom & the experience is what makes us special when we grow older in not only in age but also in brain! nicely expressed in your poem.
When we age, though we look young or younger in the case of some, thanks to modern techniques, mentally maturity is what makes us feel the absurdity of the physical attraction alone as a cause for lively interactions.............then what will the blind do...........poor blinded sons of God...........
oh! ! ! this is sort of cute one sir! ! ! i ll tell you what if you smile from your heart, even at ninety girls will fall for you... very sweet write indeed! ! ! ! thanks sir! ! ! ... well expressed indeed! ! ! with lots of love and smile shan
wow this poem really touched my heart.. well written.. and well done
Tremendous write. I honestly dont feel my age, its whats in the heart that matters! Enjoyed; D