Wednesday, March 29, 2006

Age Comments

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As age takes its toll and our bodies fail.
The young sit around and listen to our tales,
Of days long past, when we were young,
And the world was ours with a song to be sung.
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Brian Joseph Dickenson
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Preeti - is here! 17 May 2006

I am just 18 but still feel I am old..lol loved the last stanza of your poem~ Preets

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Brian Dorn 23 April 2006

Brian, your poem delves into some difficult questions. Questions which, sooner or later (preferably) , we'll all know the answers to. Excellent write! Brian

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Brian Joseph Dickenson

Brian Joseph Dickenson

Liverpool, England
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