Monday, December 8, 2014

Agar Tum Na Milte Comments

Rating: 5.0

Main aksar sochti hoon zindigi jo sath guzri hay,
Agar tanha guzarti to main kabki mar gaee hoti,
Tumhare peyar ne mujhko umangen dee hayn jeene ki,
Wagarna main to murjha kar bikhar jati zamane mein.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2018

Chalo acha hua apni kahani tarbiah nikli, Agar ye almiah hoti na jane phir main keya karti, Tasawar ghair ka mere liye to ek qyamat hay, Tumhare sath koi aur hota gar to Keya karti! .......touching and impressive expression. A beautiful poem nicely executed. My pleasure reading it time and again.

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M Asim Nehal 30 September 2015

Wow so well written............Loved it. Tasawar ghair ka mere liye to ek qyamat hay, Tumhare saath koi aur hota gar to Kya karti!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2015

A beautiful poem. Nicely envisioned. Many thanks dear madam keep on writing.

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V P Mahur 28 December 2014

Dear poet, Lovely poem this one. Thanks for your comments on my poem.

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Yasmin Khan 24 December 2014

Ihsasat se bharpoor ek khoobsoort tehreer... dil ki gehraeon se likhi gyee hey iss lye dil ko chooti hy. Waqee mohabbat ke bagher jeena mr jane ke mutradif hy. bht acha laga aapki tehreeren parh kr

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Salini Nair 18 December 2014

madam i really like your poems...a feel of hearing gazals....

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Akhtar Jawad 08 December 2014

A beautiful poem.....................10

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Akhtar Jawad 08 December 2014

A beautiful poem.....................10

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