Agar Khabi Aisa Ho....(Urdu) Comments

That's a great idea we expect return without any investment.

Oh how I wish I knew Urdu, makes me sad to imagine what I am missing...

khubsurat or ba'kamaal.. .. jahan dawa sy, zakhm barhta ho. aadmi, os ko b shumaar krain. .. a lovely poem, i read. best wishes.

Nice one desire to do something which is supposd to be but the calamities, cry, grief Mujhe Allamaa Iqbaal ka taraana Lab pe aatii hai dua ban ke tamanna meri, zindagi shamaa ki manind ho khudaayaa merii.... nice to share

Jasmine, aapki kavitha bahuth acchi hai.. Aapne isse bahuth hi khoobsurti dhang se pesh kiya hai...+++10

A nice poem studded with imagery... a positive and philanthropic thought runs through the lines... @ poet's notes: yes, agreed!