Agape (Song From The Breakwaters '_ _ _') Comments

'See my love.... I maybe half the man he is but you have the whole of me..' really caught my attention.. so powerful..

this is really cool... I enjoyed it so much. love the last line. Crystal

Wow I feel as if I unknowingly intruded upon some secret dramatic moment or a famous scene from a tragedy. Really nicely done. The skies are the only limit for you, Julian.

Strong, wild desire....yet controlled, for an unrequited love! Yes, cultured...but at places.......... Why do you speak eloquently? For you imprison me...is psychic. Real Love is in letting go........... A piece of yearning.

Just fabulous. I really enjoy reading your work.

Complex poem, half romantic and half symbolist; many questions in part rhetorical and in part real. I've read some other poems by this author and found them cultured but spontaneous.

Another good one Smooth as butter on bread Your doing good man

Some memorable lines in this piece. Your last line is especially effective. Kind regards, Sandra

Amzing flow. Its very much like a catharsis that unsettles ones inner being.

This poem is excelent.

Julian dear, this is a great piece...flows so naturally from the depths of your heart. great job, i loved reading this...a 10.

wow! ! ! you made this poem flow very smoothly! ! ! its very calm and very well written! ! ! ! good job! ! ! !

a nice introspective write..deep thought..well narrated..thumbs-up 10 Ency Bearis

simply the best! ! ! lucky one! molded into a perfect poem. a modern mark twain! prize winning piece! !