Against The Rock. Comments

All of nature (the world and those in it) mesh perfectly to make a perfect moment. 'like souls about to speak' my favororite moment.

Exquisite imagery depicting words linked together as tenderly as arms around a waist - romance at it's best, thank you for this Laurie

Absolutely beautiful, your words evoke strong visuals and stir half forgotten memories

Exquisite rhyme, rhythm, atmosphere. The second verse is, for me, particularly special. Hard to write a romantic poem without going over the top, but you achieve it spectacularly.

A love poem that is just so romantic and so artfully crafted. The words lilt on and I never wanted it to stop. Your imagery is vivid and unforgettable. 10 Karin Anderson

Winds cry against the scurried clouds, like souls about to speak- I love this line This is such a beautiful poem, so romantic thank you for a fantastic read,

Aww, this is so romantic. Everyone should have their special place. Again, and as always, romantic to the core :) Thank you for sharing.

A gently lyrical poem with warmth and tenderness to spare. It's such a joy to read traditional poetry that rhymes and scans so well. A fine romantic write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Paints a picture...when I instantly get a picture in my mind, I know it is a good poem. Thanks.

What a beautifull romantic write, filled with so much heavenly imagery... It makes the reader feel as though they can actually hear the waves and the beating of two very warm hearts....... Bonnie

Imagery in very verse was fantastically penned, great master piece you have offered through his poem......10

beautifully written and it flowed exquisitely! I could picture myself there!

A smoothly flowing poem with great metre, rhythm, and rhyme. Sets the scene exquisitely too. Mark

everything is so gently moving, tender, soft...except the hard solid rock! What a beautiful contrast! ....

Oh Laurie, so lovely, so softly enchaniting and tender. It goes with favorites of course. Susan

Very gentle and romantic. beautifully written Laurie you have a lovely way with words. Kind regards Ann

A Superb write here..so much so that I was drawn into the scene you describe so well....

You have painted such a beautiful picture here Laurie...wonderful to read out loud...Fi 10

That's really good. =) It makes me sad somehow too...