Friday, April 17, 2009
Against The Current Comments
Rating: ★3.0
On the freeway the car speeds home,
And I crumple against you,
Tired from the concert
And weakened by your desire
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Carl Harris
18 April 2009
Well, this is a pretty steamy and sensuous write, Lillian, but very well written and tastefully handled. Your metaphor was a brillian stroke! Carl.
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7/20/2025 6:11:43 AM # 1.0.0
Last night, I got home late from the dart league, read your poem, put it on my favorites list without comment and went straight to bed. This morning I still have no comment, and I still really like it. Good one.