Saturday, December 27, 2014

Against My Empty Soul Comments

Rating: 4.5

The answer echoes
Against my empty soul
I listen to the waves
As they come and go
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Brian Kilpatrick
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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 February 2017

Splendid! ! ! Congrats on being chosen....

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Savita Tyagi 01 February 2017

Lovely poem. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.

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Kevin Patrick 01 February 2017

Beautifully expressed, some amazing lines hear, deeply thoughtful and well composed. Awsome

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The ever changing cycles of lessons we learn to reach what our souls always knew..love this poem a ten..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 February 2017

A beautifully conceived equally beautiful poem. Congrats on it's member poem of the Day.

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Clarence Prince 01 February 2017

My soul longs For what my heart Forgot so long ago. Yes, so long ago, indeed!

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Bharati Nayak 01 February 2017

Speak now in a language That I may understand For all these years What the waves have said To the sand - - - - - - - So beautifully penned.

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Geoffrey Fafard 01 February 2017

A gorgeous, gentle and gracious poem that shows off the beauty of the Enlish language.Thank you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 February 2017

Wonderful poem. Such a nice flow it touches the heart. Very nice.

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Indira Renganathan 01 February 2017

Superb...vlauable...respectable verses

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Tom Allport 01 February 2017

a nice poem asking questions? maybe one of them is why am I here?

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 01 February 2016

Beautifully crafted, the images blend well wit the emotions expressed. Enjoyed reading this marvelous piece,

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Terry Craddock 01 February 2016

'Speak now in a language That I may understand For all these years What the waves have said To the sand' quite profound loved this

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Kim Barney 01 February 2016

This is very nice, and well deserves being chosen as poem of the day!

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2016

This is written beautifully...I liked it, Thanks for sharing.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 01 February 2016

wow, what a lovely piece! Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 February 2016

The echoes of life! Thanks for sharing.

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Souren Mondal 01 February 2016

We all have that spiritual voice within us that can soothe us at our worst times.. A fine poem with richest of the imagery. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 January 2016

My soul longs For what my heart Forgot so long ago.. All these years the waves were talking and conveying a lot. It is so nice to see how you imagine a conversation of the waves. yes the nature teaches us a lot. thank you. tony

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Roseann Shawiak 02 July 2015

Such a fascinating and profound message from the imagery of nature! You seem to have a good grasp of an interior life and spirituality. Very touching and divine poem. I love it! Thank you once again for sharing with us. RoseAnn

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