The many lights stars in the night
Inaugering constantly a path midway
create for them a milky way
another solar system perhaps
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It is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression with nice penmanship. The last two lines are much impressive. Enjoyed with thanks.10
Thank you so much with my most appreciated and respected emotive feel for all your grandest compliments, feedback and responses, Mr. Kumarmani Sir! God´s Blessings be upon thee always. Thank you so much that you enjoyed and for your 10.
we haven't known love is but an invisible thin line and so vulnerable is man so kind...love is magnificently presented my dear poetess. it is my theme too.. thank u. tony
Thank you so much for your sweetest response and comment, dear Dr. Tony. So loveliest to let me know that LOVE is your theme too, but mind you, it is my most favorite theme! Thank u 2.
Creating a path that is called milky way many stars shine. Eclipsing sun be with the moon tonight gives wonderful message to judge upon. We get Divine bless and mercy through galaxies and God is greatest power creating all these stars and milky ways. Invisible bond between God and us never breaks due to eternal love and we thank him. A great perceptional and philosophical poem very well drafted...10
Thank you so much, Mr. Kumarmani Sir, for the objectivity towards my results, most appreciated are your feedback and frank comments upon this poem of me. Thank you so much for the 10 too.God be with you always, Sir!
Thank you so much, dear Bernard, your comment-compliments are always appreciated by me and thank you that you regard this as an inspiring write. Thank you for the 10 plus plus plus. GBU.
love is but an invisible thin line....true dear poetess SFC. It's a lovely poem.