Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Again....About Love.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The many lights stars in the night
Inaugering constantly a path midway
create for them a milky way
another solar system perhaps
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 December 2022

love is but an invisible thin line....true dear poetess SFC. It's a lovely poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2018

It is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression with nice penmanship. The last two lines are much impressive. Enjoyed with thanks.10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2018

Thank you so much with my most appreciated and respected emotive feel for all your grandest compliments, feedback and responses, Mr. Kumarmani Sir! God´s Blessings be upon thee always. Thank you so much that you enjoyed and for your 10.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2018

we haven't known love is but an invisible thin line and so vulnerable is man so kind...love is magnificently presented my dear poetess. it is my theme too.. thank u. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2018

Thank you so much for your sweetest response and comment, dear Dr. Tony. So loveliest to let me know that LOVE is your theme too, but mind you, it is my most favorite theme! Thank u 2.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2018

Creating a path that is called milky way many stars shine. Eclipsing sun be with the moon tonight gives wonderful message to judge upon. We get Divine bless and mercy through galaxies and God is greatest power creating all these stars and milky ways. Invisible bond between God and us never breaks due to eternal love and we thank him. A great perceptional and philosophical poem very well drafted...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 August 2018

Thank you so much, Mr. Kumarmani Sir, for the objectivity towards my results, most appreciated are your feedback and frank comments upon this poem of me. Thank you so much for the 10 too.God be with you always, Sir!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 July 2018

Sylvia, such an inspiring write...10+++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 August 2018

Thank you so much, dear Bernard, your comment-compliments are always appreciated by me and thank you that you regard this as an inspiring write. Thank you for the 10 plus plus plus. GBU.

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