You gave your love
Nonchalantly, obliviously
Like a day passing its memory
To tomorrow.
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very sweet......gentle words playing in my my mind and heart... bring calmness and peace to my heart... soothing......romantic 10+++
Hi Bonnie, nothing profound about this. It's just a lover wanting to make love again as they did yesterday...'yesterday's reprise'
I read this twice, and for some reason, i was missing something, the beginnig was very good, however I could not follow the ending.......Sorry
A lucid desire to repeat the music of love is inevitable in this poem.
Something very poignant about the mood of this one.10 for you. Kind regards, Sandra
again, , , we cant deny, love is in the heart of a true lover....a very touching lines composed of gentle wrds to make a complete romantic poem, , , cheers, lav ya kababayan..thanks for inviting.... naizz
so sweet and romantic.... lovely written...short but expressed the greatness of your love.. i love the words flowing in this piece.... 10++++
Lovely ad sweet write....enjoyed the read thank you....Fi 10+