Monday, February 9, 2009

Again, My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

You gave your love
Nonchalantly, obliviously
Like a day passing its memory
To tomorrow.
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Fiona Davidson 23 February 2009

Lovely ad sweet write....enjoyed the read thank you....Fi 10+

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Miriam Maia Padua 22 February 2009

very sweet......gentle words playing in my my mind and heart... bring calmness and peace to my heart... soothing......romantic 10+++

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Eddie Roa 09 February 2009

Hi Bonnie, nothing profound about this. It's just a lover wanting to make love again as they did yesterday...'yesterday's reprise'

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Bonnie Collins 09 February 2009

I read this twice, and for some reason, i was missing something, the beginnig was very good, however I could not follow the ending.......Sorry

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 February 2009

A lucid desire to repeat the music of love is inevitable in this poem.

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Joseph Poewhit 09 February 2009

Poem sort of possesses a special spice

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Sandra Fowler 09 February 2009

Something very poignant about the mood of this one.10 for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Naidz Ladia 09 February 2009

again, , , we cant deny, love is in the heart of a true lover....a very touching lines composed of gentle wrds to make a complete romantic poem, , , cheers, lav ya kababayan..thanks for inviting.... naizz

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 February 2009

so sweet and romantic.... lovely written...short but expressed the greatness of your love.. i love the words flowing in this piece.... 10++++

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Eddie Roa

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Manila. Philippines
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