Again I Come Back Comments

A powerful perspect that is both creative and compelling! Well done my friend!

Another nice poem. I got the tune of 'Abar asibo fire ei Banglai... by Jibanananda Das. But here you approach is quite different. You poem appeals for the whole motherland, India. Excellent work. I really like to read it. Best wishes..

Your love, affection, patriotism don't allow you to leave the soil and you come back. A poem full of devotion to motherland.

We come into this world with no material things and we leaved the same. But we came from dust and to dust we will return. In your case, the soil of India in mine a different place but the cycle remains the same. Just different rituals and rights of passage. But as another has said, dust to dust was not spoke of the soul, that is eternal.