Again And Again......(Lothario's Lisp) Comments

pure and unconditional love is immortal and one can cherish the memories throughout his life! ! ! it's a heart-felt write! ! ! My misery unheard; why should it so descend, its farewell then? that's fate? Can't we pretend? loved these lines! ! ! Times flown; my hair graying my soul is fraying you across oceans, I impaled, alone, slaying stirring lines! ! ! i loved it! ! !

Love is an overpowering emotion in the poet's heart and being away from the beloved it deepens more and more as the feeling that time's passing on becomes painful. It's very emotional and romantic.

wow a really gd poem and gd chose of the words...man that's nice

'I’ve felt you in blistering deserts in gales an pouring rain As events drag my body and make me go insane Forever I relive goodbyes an feel the wrenching pain, If I had the gift of lives, I would love you again an again! ' I love these lines most.

the love just overflows.... the ending says it best...'if i had the gift of lives, I would love you again and again'.....

a passionate write..............well penned

Such sad longing - neither time nor distance can dull the intensity of true love's emotional hold on us. So bittersweet - as they say, 'it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all', but that doesn't take away the pain. Strong, powerful and well done! Linda

There's much passion, strong rhyming, and well contrived discernible rhythm in this Saadat. You've clearly applied yourself to the crafting aspect of the business and that always adds to the reading experience. I enjoyed this Saadat. Thank you. jim

The memories in the heart will never part however far we may depart! True love is a union of heart, mind and soul the body is only a vestament [a cloak]. Good flow of words and thought!