Friday, October 11, 2013

Again And Again ~ Comments

Rating: 4.9

Who do you talk to,
When there is no one there
Who see's reality?
Who really cares?
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Lyn Paul
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Francie Lynch 19 May 2014

Hi Lyn. I really like this poem. In fact, it's too good not to get another hard edit. I hope you're okay with that comment. Editing is harder than writing, but being a minimalist, I strive to eliminate words that I thought were essential, but are not. That way, I get a bigger bang. For example, my In That Country was originally a full page. Now it's a few lines. Good write. Thanks.

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Kanav Justa 15 November 2013

Always... still give to those in need It heals the pain and lessens the bleed wonderful lines, , , ,

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Liliana ~el 20 October 2013

Tough coping; often we don't understand or see the answers until the very end; enlightenment at peak

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Valsa George 13 October 2013

Give to those in need... again and again! Some may need love, some others support, some, monetary help, yet another may need a kind word, an encouraging gesture or just a smile! Yea, it is when we give that we derive true joy! A great message

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David Wood 12 October 2013

Very true words Lyn, we must give to those who are in true need.

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Danny Draper 12 October 2013

Compassion is often viewed by the deluded as a weakness, it is a strength greater than greed and as universal as love and kindness.

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