Again and again
The tears and the pain
I can't any more
Take this blame
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a feely write.... and indeed this theme is repeated again and again.....every where.... keep penning cheers
A plea from the heart, again and again, can't anymore... heartfelt read: D
will sunny... i don't know if i should thank u or not after this comment but in life like mine i'll always keep writing poems like this one
Zaynab, first of all congratulations, it is very well written.It is simple yet interesting. Second, if you are going to use poetry just to express your depression, you better find so many different ways to do so. Otherwise all of your poems are going to look alike by their themes and by their structure and style. There's no problem in writing under the same atmosphere, under one subject, all you have to do is to find very interesting and different ways and styles to do so. Third, I see that you have a strong confidence in yourself, that's a very good things. Don't lose it ;)
hahaha it's so gd poem and some time i wish that u still always depresset so u can write gd poems...jk
Some things in life are like that, BUT, with GOD all things are possible.
I love it, how you embrace negativity this poem show that.