Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Again And Again Comments

Rating: 4.4

Again and again
The tears and the pain
I can't any more
Take this blame
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zaynab el zein
COMMENTS
James Jordan 12 July 2010

I love it, how you embrace negativity this poem show that.

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Gul naz 11 July 2010

Strongly expressive poetry

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Lady Grace 11 July 2010

nicely done..expressive

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Salam Hatameleh 11 July 2010

Lovely, but you should not always feel blamed, feel hope

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Saadat Tahir 09 July 2010

a feely write.... and indeed this theme is repeated again and again.....every where.... keep penning cheers

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Kolawole Ajao 07 July 2010

Nice write. Continue.

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A plea from the heart, again and again, can't anymore... heartfelt read: D

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Zaynab Elzain 05 July 2010

will sunny... i don't know if i should thank u or not after this comment but in life like mine i'll always keep writing poems like this one

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Hrayr Tchanan 05 July 2010

Zaynab, first of all congratulations, it is very well written.It is simple yet interesting. Second, if you are going to use poetry just to express your depression, you better find so many different ways to do so. Otherwise all of your poems are going to look alike by their themes and by their structure and style. There's no problem in writing under the same atmosphere, under one subject, all you have to do is to find very interesting and different ways and styles to do so. Third, I see that you have a strong confidence in yourself, that's a very good things. Don't lose it ;)

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Sunny Emo Girl 04 July 2010

hahaha it's so gd poem and some time i wish that u still always depresset so u can write gd poems...jk

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Issam Hal 03 July 2010

a very nice poem and very close to the real

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Joseph Poewhit 23 June 2010

Some things in life are like that, BUT, with GOD all things are possible.

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