Friday, March 29, 2013

Again And Again Comments

Rating: 4.5

how does this end, end of me
waiting in the lingering hours
with soft piece of god gift
Music and softly fading smoke
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Shraman bajracharya
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Yash Shinde 19 March 2014

.....your grief is powerfully expressed through multitude of emotions.......which gives life to this piece, lovely write dear

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