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wow really impressive you can actually understand how you feel to an extent through your words i love how at the end, you admit that you know you wont follow through step one to getting better in any case is aknowledging the problem

love this poem! can relate to it, metaphorically i mean, intresting from start to finish, its good to get it out so keep writing.! ! ! !

A beautiful poetic narration..well penned! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++

dear sam this is well penned nice work Luwi

I like this poem alot I like how u. Tell it very unique

Hay Sam your poetry is great but brother I think you need help. I did and got it

prudent way of representating poetic ability...10 again..

I've had many of these days man, straight up real stuff you got goin keep it up