Sunday, July 19, 2009

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Rating: 4.6

I awoke in a circus tent surrounded by a horde of elephant
The smell of my surroundings was nothing close to elegant
I remember absolutely zero about the night before
Dirty is my body feeling useless as an apple core
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Sam Edison
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Hailey Agnew 06 August 2009

wow really impressive you can actually understand how you feel to an extent through your words i love how at the end, you admit that you know you wont follow through step one to getting better in any case is aknowledging the problem

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Sayz LFlynn 28 July 2009

love this poem! can relate to it, metaphorically i mean, intresting from start to finish, its good to get it out so keep writing.! ! ! !

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Catrina Heart 23 July 2009

A beautiful poetic narration..well penned! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++

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Luwi Habte 22 July 2009

dear sam this is well penned nice work Luwi

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Hadyn Rodriguez 19 July 2009

I like this poem alot I like how u. Tell it very unique

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Patrick A. Martin 19 July 2009

Hay Sam your poetry is great but brother I think you need help. I did and got it

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Allemagne Roßmann 19 July 2009

prudent way of representating poetic ability...10 again..

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Jazza Bella 19 July 2009

I've had many of these days man, straight up real stuff you got goin keep it up

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