I awoke in a circus tent surrounded by a horde of elephant
The smell of my surroundings was nothing close to elegant
I remember absolutely zero about the night before
Dirty is my body feeling useless as an apple core
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love this poem! can relate to it, metaphorically i mean, intresting from start to finish, its good to get it out so keep writing.! ! ! !
A beautiful poetic narration..well penned! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++
Hay Sam your poetry is great but brother I think you need help. I did and got it
I've had many of these days man, straight up real stuff you got goin keep it up
wow really impressive you can actually understand how you feel to an extent through your words i love how at the end, you admit that you know you wont follow through step one to getting better in any case is aknowledging the problem