Wednesday, January 4, 2006

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I will still try to catch the sunrise
Try to catch more jars of fireflies
Roll down hills in the wet grass
Get sentimental at Christmas
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Nicky McNeil
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Joy Vanderhelm 13 January 2006

Pretty decent lines, Nicky. I like the couplets. They fit with the feeling I think you were trying to convey. Very nice.

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Carole (Cookie) Arnold 08 January 2006

Wonderfully written great couplets and innovative imagery Well Done Smiles Cookie

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Nicky McNeil

Nicky McNeil

Nashville, Tennessee
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