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I love this one! ! ! Beautiful

The short width of your lines takes us easy to read till the end without any pause of disappointing....That's cool! !

This one I liked to a great extent. The flow between the short lines contained indirect discreet lines that evoked a lot of truth and beauty. Also, you are quite a natural philosopher! Thank you for your comment on my Mahler poem.

as I go after reading this, as if to go after what I used to be like. Where would I want to go back? Probably wanting to go back innocent...