Saturday, January 30, 2010

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Rating: 3.5

Clouds of blues cavern me
Staring tearfully on the chimney
“Am I crying? ” asking whimsically
Believing not but questionably
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Whisperkwane Lamb 11 February 2010

a great way to express that which you do not wish to express...love...evil or good... only the lost shall tell.

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Kranthi Pothineni 11 February 2010

Very expressive write.Specially the last two verses. If this site allows me to vote, then it will 10.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 11 February 2010

hmmm.... well expressed.... great!

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