Afterthoughts Comments

Today I turn back, all our happy days As I count were just seven days only! So very sad! Death is a pain that can never be erased from memory. But love glows for ever....... Poignant poem.........10

A loss is a loss that makes me feel lost O' my pain, ease thyself lain dead and dumb.....most inspiring lines with outstanding concept. This is beautiful poem in your pen that will be appreciated. Thanks for sharing.

We should not express fault or guilt or harass others. In living condition a person needs special care and love. A person sustains with beauty, care and love. Death is truth it brings separation. This poem makes us very emotional. This is excellently penned...10

Heartfelt Poem, after thoughts are always painful. It is like a postmortem report which can only tell you the cause and reasons but one cannot go in the past and amend it., but learn lessons and take heed. Thoughtful Poem.10+++