Afterthought Comments

Oh My God Sweetheart this Lines are Saliently elaborate...and concise. Cheers Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

This poem is by all means a beautiful hurt, your heart is crushed but you guide us through it anyway. I offer you a sad thank you, little one. Uriah

I will have to agree with Doc on the lenght, , , It is filled with a great tallent for writing, I am sure with the level of writing it took more than a lunch hour to do.I easly gave it a 10, Even with the long length, I was still excited to read the next line even towards the end..