Wednesday, November 7, 2018

Afternoon Thundercloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is this thundercloud
At my gate
Around every afternoon
Threatening to rain
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Madathil Rajendran Nair
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bri edwards 02 March 2019

maybe " loosing himself" . maybe " ...presided over by a.." the cloud seems to be very close, but maybe simultaneously far away. i wish i could do such a trick! " abdominal pain" ? Is YOUR 'stomach' 'tied in knots', needing a muse-cloud to spur your creative genius? ? bri :) i think Kelly's is the " balding pate" .

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Thanks Bri for choosing to loosen on my poem! . Amusing is your sense of humour, I should say. Hope Kelly agrees.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 17 November 2018

Thank you Valsa-ji. I thought you became a US citizen from your recent appearances on fb. Thank God, a poet of your calibre is still around in a hopeless Kerala with a promise of aesthetic renaissance. May our friendship flourish although there has been a lull due to circumstances beyond control.

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valsa george 23 January 2019

Thank you Rajendran ji! I am very much here. My trip to the US has been of a short duration of one month! Because of a busy time, I am not able to spend much time on poem hunter or face book! Of course I admire you as a great writer and our friendship goes in tact!

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Valsa George 23 January 2019

Thank you Rajendran ji! I am very much here. My trip to the US has been of a short duration of one month! Because of a busy time, I am not able to spend much time on poem hunter or face book! Of course I admire you as a great writer and our friendship goes in tact!

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valsa george 17 November 2018

Yesterday evening literally there was a thunder cloud and a deluge of downpour all over Kerala and Tamil Nadu! Great write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2018

There is threatening of rain at every afternoon. Let us incubate soon the dreams and feel mind's perception. Flow of river of craziness is definitely interesting. A brilliant poem with rich imagery is excellently penned.10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 16 November 2018

Thank you very much, Kumarmani-ji!

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Kelly Kurt 07 November 2018

On the balding pate Of a hill far far away What a wonderful description!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 09 November 2018

Thanks, Kelly!

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