Thursday, February 1, 2007

Afternoon Siesta Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your willowy body on top of me
Our eyes entwined
Our bodies moving...
My hearbeat
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Jerry Hughes 12 February 2007

I note that 'she who must be obeyed' aka my beloved Alison, has commented and welcomed you, Sandy. All I need add is, ditto, ditto ditto...

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Esther Leclerc 10 February 2007

Sandy, welcome to Poem Hunter! My dear friend Allie mentioned your poetry. This has a dreamy quality and peace about it, well done. Esther : ]

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Brian Dorn 03 February 2007

I like how you ended the poem on such simple terms. Well done, Sandy! ! Brian

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Alison Cassidy 01 February 2007

A lyrical evocative piece written with compassion and spirit. Love the last eight lines in particular - they are a poem in themselves. Welcome to the site, Sandy. Looking forward to more. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx

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