Monday, June 1, 2009

# Afternoon Shadows Comments

Rating: 5.0

The late sun turned two birds into four

In the glare they all seem like shadows
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Sonya Florentino
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Patti Masterman 06 December 2009

The title is delicious and the few lines even more so. I love the deep thought in here; it almost seems camouflaged at first but then hits you with a left and right punch. (smile)

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Frank Lambert 31 August 2009

Hi Sonya, I really enjoyed reading this one, the ending kinda caught me by surprise. It shouldn't have, but it did and it made me like the verse even more. Frank

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Lillian Thomas 10 July 2009

an exquisite little poem, not a word too many nor too few. This is a jewel, Sonya!

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Indira Babbellapati 06 June 2009

short and sweet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

The night does seem that way as it has a slower pace and gives us more time to reflect. Thank you for sharing Sonya, this short, sweet and touching. :)

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Laurie Hill 02 June 2009

The night can be so cruel when thoughts beset the mind as the shadows appear

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L. Rigyra Nidro 01 June 2009

short and sweet I like your imagery with the birds and shadows

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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