Wednesday, July 12, 2006

Afternoon Rain Poem Comments

Rating: 4.8

So is that time of day.
Some go for the hay.
Others try and find a way.
Yet, it is the end of day-almost.
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JOE POEWHIT
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Adeeb Alfateh 10 June 2019

Some just like to let it coast. Some bring it in with a toast. it's beautiful poem; great 10++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2019

It is all part of the day. Days are paid with great hopes. This poem is very brilliantly penned with perception of rain...10

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Marvin Brato 18 December 2017

Soothing afternoon rain cleanses the mind from stressful thoughts from work.. well said!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 13 July 2011

very well-said nice thought

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 January 2010

quite interesting! nice job!

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nomad omnia 28 November 2009

Nice one Joe. It fits this day perfectly. N

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Moonbee Canady 01 November 2009

Very Nice Reminiscing... Poetical Indeed... Thank You For Sharing That Rainy Afternoon (I Too Love Rain) ending a full, satisfied day... MoonBee

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Ivy Blyth 04 October 2009

I like your style of writing. I will be browsing - often.

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Ric Bastasa 25 September 2009

keep wrting joe.. nice poems frm the heart

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Romeo Della Valle 18 September 2009

Hey Joe, what a way, to freely say what can go on in regular day, I like it, by the way, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Anabel just Anabel 08 September 2009

so cute! I like it very much! somehow I just picture it: D very nice!

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John Raubenheimer 01 September 2009

I like the way this poem resolves. Very pleasing.

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 August 2009

Nice one indeed. Simple but not so simple.

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Yelena M. 25 August 2009

Refreshing like a summer rain..beautiful words, Joe, thanks for sharing. Yelena M.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 July 2009

a pleasing poem indeed! ..............fantstic! 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 05 July 2009

a day is always day by itself...yet it's different for many...you present different portraits of a 'day' for few lives there...thanks Joe...meaningful write...10

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So is that time of day. Some go for the hay. Others try and find a way. Yet, it is the end of day-almost....... ya almost finish of the day and after rainwonder creation of God in sky aprt from witnessing days work.....good presentation.. i love it

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fantastic joe! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Bob Blackwell 08 June 2009

Joe, a pleasing fresh air poem, good for the soul. ! 0+

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Kushal Vaishnani 04 June 2009

Fresh as clement breeze.. loved it thoroughly!

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