Afternoon On The Porch Comments

Carolynn...I love the way your images weave one into another continually furthering the poem. Good work, by a good poet. I'm headed for the next one. Take care, John

Hi Carol, good to see you writing and posting again. I especially like the first stanza and the disconnection-. Tight cohesive writing, imprinted with your style.

A gentle but imagey and sensuous piece.