Afternoon In Summer Comments

I agree completley, this poem is wonderfully described. A beautiful scene depicted very skillfully.

The last 2,3 lines are a painterly contrast with the first 2 -3, Linda

Very visually appealing....I like the concept and the way you portrayed it. But something about the line 'with light stuck out like a tongue' ruins the flow of the poem...maybe you could twist it a little to make it sound smoother.