Saturday, January 20, 2018
Afternoon Comments
Rating: ★5.0
You've had lunch at one O'clock
You've sat for an hour daydreaming
And now you are out for the afternoon stroll
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
20 January 2018
A great write that expresses in beautiful detail what a fine afternoon one would have. An enjoyable piece.10
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David Wood
20 January 2018
Thank you Rose Marie, I've changed it four times so far. I'll get it right one day!
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7/24/2025 6:41:41 PM # 1.0.0
Wow! David, I felt like I was walking beside you on that day, your details and presentation is excellent.