Afternoon Comments

I like the equating of emotions to a specific time of day.. a stream that runs in all of us but few care to pen. Nice read. I have one written on afternoon, shall share.

Love and pleasure in the afternoon. The rain added an extra aroma to the already enlightening passion. A very passionate and charming write.

Wonderful write! poetry runs through your blood

Your words flow so easily from your pen...love how you pain the story with each stroke...its wonderful

very passionate and allusive, rich blended write

Again very very good. My poery is blunt but my prose is another beast altogether. Samantha

so beautiful and full of emotions.....such a remarkable piece sir loved it best wishes, payal