Tuesday, September 3, 2019

Aftermaths Of A War By The Sun And The Moon Comments

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When the radioactive clouds covered the earth,
and the small green garden was changed in a brown desert,
flowers and butterflies disappeared,
there was no water and mermaids did not swim.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2019

Liked the closure lines. So thought provoking. Brilliantly penned. Onto my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2019

Another magnificent write on war, Sir. It expresses in brilliant detail the effects of war in great poetic verses. Very insightful and perceptive write.

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