Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Aftermaths-Memo Day 2008 Comments

Rating: 3.5

ALONE.
MEMORY.
SIGHS.
WHY?
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JOE POEWHIT
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Mukta Sawant 26 May 2012

Loneliness is the worst feeling in the world.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 October 2009

You need company.(Thanks for your comment)

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Jennifer Wilson 02 September 2009

Simple but really effective. Thanks for commenting on mine BTW!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2009

What is happening to me? Crazy thoughts that just won't flee. Into the bathroom - head down. Tears running over the deep frown. not confident of self and no trust in him otherwise this may not happen at all...very good write. i loved it.. read mine individual...cry not....all trains stop here...

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Pandian Angelina 01 July 2009

Yes, the final question which lingers is Why? Why? all this bloodshed, pain, sacrifice And untimely death, ulitimately - Why? A question which should all think of. The anguish of the soul and The cry of the heart is indeed Touching and sadness fills the mind. Angel

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'ALONE./ SHADOWS / SCREAMS / WHY? ' Who is? Scream of Poet....10+++ Why is unanswarable

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being alone i the true situation...being able to attain unison from being alone is our souls endevour

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Cheers nice form deep sense love it 10+++

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Pandian Angelina 03 April 2009

ALONE.... is by itself a punishment. You Have captured the essence of Sorrow the pain and grief in such simple and short verse. A very wonderful poem Sir.

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Meggie Gultiano 19 November 2008

nicely penned.thanks for this

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Julian Salvacion 11 November 2008

simple and yet so intricate in its meaining! nicely penned

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Jesus does save. Don't ever forget it. Thanks for sharing. -Brie

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