ALONE.
MEMORY.
SIGHS.
WHY?
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Simple but really effective. Thanks for commenting on mine BTW!
What is happening to me? Crazy thoughts that just won't flee. Into the bathroom - head down. Tears running over the deep frown. not confident of self and no trust in him otherwise this may not happen at all...very good write. i loved it.. read mine individual...cry not....all trains stop here...
Yes, the final question which lingers is Why? Why? all this bloodshed, pain, sacrifice And untimely death, ulitimately - Why? A question which should all think of. The anguish of the soul and The cry of the heart is indeed Touching and sadness fills the mind. Angel
'ALONE./ SHADOWS / SCREAMS / WHY? ' Who is? Scream of Poet....10+++ Why is unanswarable
being alone i the true situation...being able to attain unison from being alone is our souls endevour
ALONE.... is by itself a punishment. You Have captured the essence of Sorrow the pain and grief in such simple and short verse. A very wonderful poem Sir.
simple and yet so intricate in its meaining! nicely penned
Jesus does save. Don't ever forget it. Thanks for sharing. -Brie
Loneliness is the worst feeling in the world.