Monday, June 6, 2011

Aftermath Comments

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Feel the scars upon my skin,
Keep me from what could have been,
Save me from this dark embrace,
Find the steps I can’t retrace.
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Arik Fletcher
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Jean Dament 06 June 2011

I like the way you expressed the pain in this poem. It made us feel it all too; as we can relate to it in our lives. Well done. Spiritsong

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