Monday, March 26, 2007

Aftermath Comments

Rating: 5.0

Aftershocks of mental anguish
submerge you into submission.
Turn yourself in as the culprit,
without your friends’ admonitions.
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Michael Fischer
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Brian Hinckley 16 May 2007

A very good poem with many different ways you could take it. Great job, Micheal.

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Tracy Rollings 05 May 2007

You wish your judgment wasn’t impaired when you were in his physical prison. Excellent write, very deep and well worded, you did very good on this one, keep up the good work

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Michael Fischer

Michael Fischer

Buffalo, New York
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