Monday, November 5, 2007

Afterlife Comments

Rating: 5.0

After life comes death.
After death there maybe an after life.
What do you really think?
Do you believe in after life?
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Selina Gurgacz
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Alison Cassidy 05 November 2007

You have chosen a huge subject for this poem - one which has puzzled and absorbed philosophers and students of theology (plus everyone else too) for thousands of years. And no one really knows, do they. I guess the mystery is what makes life so exciting, and scary too. Your have an easy poetic style with a good feel for language. The shape of your poem works a treat, especially the comfortable cadence at the end. I look forward to reading more of your work. love, Allie xxxx

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 05 November 2007

: Anything's possible. Great write. It makes you think alot...

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Selina Gurgacz

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