Afterlife Comments

I love your poem. It was actually the first poem i chose for my school project.

Lovely poem that gives us a hint of what we think of our afterlife. Thanks, Alan Walker. You have a wonderful style of saying things.

the unknown who is to say. keeps one thinking

in few words it says a lot, I find it funny & interesting, nice!

Thanks for reading my poem... Short and sweet, this poem conveys a thought that men tend to forget. Awesome! :)

superb

Hi Dave - A write that gets you to ponder. I like the intrigue aspect. Cheers! !

I wrote a poem on the same topic, ended up like an essay, you are very good with words, saying so much with so few

Sounds like insomnia?

The yet unknown, it could well be, great thought in that poem.

Interesting - food for thought.

I really like this, it leaves me thinking. Great Poem!

Very nice write indeed! ! Cheers!

perhaps we are there now! thought provoking!

Dave, you must have been reading my dreams of late! I have not been sleeping well for some time, mostly due to some amazing and strange dreams that have been visiting me. And the words you have here written sure hit it exactly correct. I wonder the same thing. Great write.

It's like a blind try to imagine a colorful landscape, people will only say how it looks by word, a pleasant feeling maybe bud...For this matter we are really blind we read the descriptions in Holy Book but the thing will never seen until we are there soon...get ready for the unimaginable scene] Do we ready? _Unwritten Soul