What is this dark mist that
Covers me?
There is no ground to set my feet upon,
No sky to look up into,
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Goodness, I like that you have such a positive view on the afterlife :) Well, done and very interesting!
Heh. I'm not dead so i wouldnt know if death was disappointing or not lol. ^~ But i like it, it has depth
i like the expression and mood i get from this poem. Its dark, and sad afterlife sort of sounds like life.